100 DoRaM: Day 38 – Koi no Yokan

Premonition sublime

Walking towards you

Loving the feeling inside me

Echoes of what aches to be

Encapsulated by a breath

Heart quakes a little

Quiver in thoughts

Echoes of what aches to be

Core ripped a part

Emotions building

You’ve touched me

Echoes of what aches to be

Eyes locked in dreams

Beyond the feelings

Beyond the soul

Echoes of what aches to be

Hands, fingers coiled

Souls traveling intertwined

Meditation of you and me

Echoes of what aches…

 

© 2017 Mel Gutiér

28 thoughts on “100 DoRaM: Day 38 – Koi no Yokan

  1. Every line is amazing. “souls traveling intertwined, meditation of you and me”
    Stunning. Perfect. I love every part of this! “echoes of what aches to be” repeating like an echo! You’re so clever! ❤
    I’m sorry it caused you pain to write, but this is better than I could have hoped for, Mel! I read it in emails, I read it here twice, then I played the music and read it twice, and now I’m so uplifted and happy! 😊😚
    Thank you for struggling through my writing prompt. I really appreciate this. You’re the best. 💗😚😊 Though it doesn’t look like a struggle at all. You made it look easy!

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