100 DoRaM: Day 56 – The Slow Down


Your hand across my prose

Lingering your touch

I’m wondering…

This tale of kindred hearts

Wishing it to life

The slow down of my mind

Showering wild thoughts on you

Easy… loving you… easy

Calmly reaching for your hand

No rushing this…

Kisses, they flow from me

The slow down of my heart

Beating calmly, soothing

Your voice

Crooning my ears

I’m wondering…

The heart beat of us

The slow down of my soul

Soaring high on you

Linking joy to every day

Universe holding… still

The ache embedded

Setting it free towards you

The slow down of my life

Taking time for you

Loving the stir in me

Your heart

A beautiful scene

Nothing and no one but you

The slow down of my dreams

Whispers echo

Soft caress of your poetry

Drifting above our skies

Letting go of the past

Floating towards you

The slow down of us






© 2017 Mel Gutiér


Love y’all.

Thanks so much for reading and for listening.






28 thoughts on “100 DoRaM: Day 56 – The Slow Down

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  6. I’m replaying the lovely soothing track again while I write this comment !! Oh Mel, your words moved beautifully with a beat of sensual slowness, seemingly in tune with the wonderful music., and then your poem gave me an entrancing crescendo ending….. I wish I could embrace you and whisper into your ear how emotionally happy you made me feel.

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      1. I’m a bit betterer this week, so far !!. I’ve lots of writings/poems you’ve yet to catch-up on. But don’t worry scom, I know you’re busy with the book. Plenty of time laterer. They’re always on my site…. Hugs xx

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