This was part of my early 100 days. It was a strong inspired piece because it was a prompt from my dear friend CLEVER. I have difficulty following through with prompts but this was very strong in me (maybe because it was a friend who suggested it) and well… it just poured out… eventually.
Premonition sublime
Walking towards you
Loving the feeling inside me
Echoes of what aches to be
Encapsulated by a breath
Heart quakes a little
Quiver in thoughts
Echoes of what aches to be
Core ripped a part
Emotions building
You’ve touched me
Echoes of what aches to be
Eyes locked in dreams
Beyond the feelings
Beyond the soul
Echoes of what aches to be
Hands, fingers coiled
Souls traveling intertwined
Meditation of you and me
Echoes of what aches…
© 2017 Mel Gutiér
Reblogged this on Fiction in My Head and commented:
Happy Monday Lovelies!
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These lines spoke to me:
“Eyes locked in dreams
Beyond the feelings
Beyond the soul”
I so relate and this poem and the video itself is a breath-taking and moving inspiring poem. You bring hope to earth and its people. Thank you for you writing this. 🙂
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Wow!! Charlie! You are so kind. Thank you for your sweet words.
Hugs!
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You’re very welcome, Mel.
With every work you produce there’s always something magic happening in your vocabulary. 🙂
Hugs to you.
P.S Posted a new poem. Have a dictionary ready. hahaha!!!
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I’m trying to recover… catch up and see if my brain can take another hit from your powerful poetry! 😉
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Right one. 🙂
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Oops! I meant (Right on). hahaha!!! Take your time. 🙂
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Lol! I knew what you meant! Stay cool… look out! I might pop a brain cell! 😲
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hahahahaha!!!!
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😉
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