Koi no Yokan

This was part of my early 100 days.  It was a strong inspired piece because it was a prompt from my dear friend CLEVER.  I have difficulty following through with prompts but this was very strong in me (maybe because it was a friend who suggested it) and well… it just poured out… eventually.

Premonition sublime

Walking towards you

Loving the feeling inside me

Echoes of what aches to be

Encapsulated by a breath

Heart quakes a little

Quiver in thoughts

Echoes of what aches to be

Core ripped a part

Emotions building

You’ve touched me

Echoes of what aches to be

Eyes locked in dreams

Beyond the feelings

Beyond the soul

Echoes of what aches to be

Hands, fingers coiled

Souls traveling intertwined

Meditation of you and me

Echoes of what aches…


© 2017 Mel Gutiér

34 thoughts on “Koi no Yokan

      1. The poem… is the translation. Premonition of love… falling in love… finding that love… in a dream state. Something not yet fulfilled but feeling.

        Can’t really translate literally… you just have to feel it. My poem… One Day is based on THIS same premise.

        Thanks so much for your visit!

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      2. Anand

        Ah now I get a feel of it. Yes we can’t translate many things into other languages. Limitations of languages. Thanks for explaining so well. 🙂

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  1. Ward Clever

    I love you for writing this! Mel!
    I remember the trouble you had with prompts, and how difficult this was for you… But you wrote it anyway. You’re amazing
    What you wrote is as beautiful and touching now as it was then. Thank you for these sentiments ❤😍💋😙😊😑

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