One Day

Walking along a parallel
You etched a groove inside my heart
It lay concealed by life-long struggles
Waiting for its path to start

Running along a parallel
The world became too fast too soon
It buried me in concrete kisses
Too heavy for my heart to swoon

Floating a long a parallel
The life I thought was perfectly written
Bared little resemblance to my dreams
And there my true self lay deeply hidden

Soaring along a parallel
The truth was yet to be revealed
The way it began to carve itself out
Without you, it dared not be sealed

Dreaming along a parallel
Immersed in emotions we longed to say
Never expecting the wave of affection
Craving the knowledge of… One Day

© 2017 Mel Gutiér

27 thoughts on “One Day

  1. Walking, running, floating and dreaming along the parallel…one day…haunting music..nostalgic imagery…beautiful verse Mel, thank you 🙂 Have a great weekend 🙂

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      1. Ummm…are you talking to me mam..*looks around himself just to check* then starts talking: thank you so much mam. You’re just amazing 🙂

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    1. Awww! You’re amazing. Wow! I’m so touched that this touched you! Lol! You’re beautiful! I’m grateful fir your words. This is poem is based on a true story. I’m glad you connected.

      Hugs my lovely!😘


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