I am she and she is me

The way to her heart is dark

Hides in secret under rocks

Dampened melancholy whispers

Whispered… whisper… whispers

The sound of the rain tapping… tip… tip… tapping

She closes her eyes wide… to a reflection unlike…


Flood gates crashed and caused a burn

Quiet vicissitude weighing heavy on her spirit

As the wind pushes the dirt off her shoulder

Hiraeth lingering profoundly leaving a gash

No longer there, no longer she…

No longer who she… used to be

© 2018 Mel Gutiér

45 thoughts on “I am she and she is me

      1. Really.. It has an impact on me.  Depending who is watching it.
        Am happy I viewed it very well. Am not to good in soft music.
        Mine is rap music like Kanye West Jay Z Eminem and the rest rappers.

        I also have good stories you can check on my blog also.

        My latest post is the peace love  writer award. You can check it out and tell me your own view about it.

        Peace ✌and Love ❤

        Liked by 1 person

      2. I came to your blog because of Novus. I like the award. I like the message.

        I love all kinds of music. I like kanye and Jay Z. I just feature songs that have inspired me to write or set the mood for writing. You might find rap at some point.

        Will come back to tour your blog a bit more as time permits.



      3. Ohhhh Novus. He/she is such a good guy/girl. I love the contribution he/she made for me base on the award post.

        Now a question for you:
        What is your own idea about the award?
        Love to see contributions on it?

        Peace ✌and Love ❤

        Liked by 1 person

  1. Haunting and poignant, delivered with melancholic longing… This tore my heart out, my love. You bleed well, and I’m not sure if that’s a good thing…

    Hugs and love to you always. ❤😍

    Liked by 2 people

Leave a Reply

Please log in using one of these methods to post your comment:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Google photo

You are commenting using your Google account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s