Some Kind of Heaven – Flashback to Prologue: Part 5

Part 1, Part 2, Part 3, Part 4 This chapter is almost over.  I can't believe how long it is.  All the chapters in this manuscript were this long or longer.  Were.  I've since changed a lot.  I feel it flows better and is not so long winded.  Honestly this labor of love has me …

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Some Kind of Heaven – Flashback to Prologue: Part 4

Part 1, Part 2, Part 3 I have been deleting like crazy.  A better way of putting it, pithy... less is more.  My head baffles me sometimes. How can I write in so much detail and dialogue really not needed?  But I do like it. I see my story like a movie in my head.  …

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