Some Kind of Heaven – Flashback to Prologue: Part 5

Part 1, Part 2, Part 3, Part 4 This chapter is almost over.  I can't believe how long it is.  All the chapters in this manuscript were this long or longer.  Were.  I've since changed a lot.  I feel it flows better and is not so long winded.  Honestly this labor of love has me …

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Some Kind of Heaven – Flashback to Prologue: Part 4

Part 1, Part 2, Part 3 I have been deleting like crazy.  A better way of putting it, pithy... less is more.  My head baffles me sometimes. How can I write in so much detail and dialogue really not needed?  But I do like it. I see my story like a movie in my head.  …

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Some Kind of Heaven – Flashback to Prologue: Part 3

Part 1, Part 2 … “I can’t believe it! Joseph why didn’t you say anything to us? “Sorry Dad. Alexis always says if I tell she’ll beat me.” “Oh my God! Alex… I –” David was overcome and showered hugs and kisses over Joseph over, and over again. He looked at him intensely unable to …

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Some Kind of Heaven – Flashback to Prologue: Part 2

Part I Originally the point of this chapter was to show a little bit of how the bond between the two lovers was cemented.  However, I just realized, in re-reading, that a couple of side stories that are happening are also being tied together here.  I'm not sure this chapter would make sense at the …

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